If you want. Just do your homework. Correct me please. Pete
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If you want. Just do your homework. Correct me please. Pete
Good evening my friends.
It seems that my english writing is annoying you.
So, can, or do you want to correct me please?
I will start from there. This will give me a guideline to
understand what I am doing wrong.
Start with this one.
and anyone in any other thread I've posted.
Thank You.
Pete.
It seems that my english writing is annoying you.
So, can, or do you want to correct me please?
I will start from there. This will give me a guideline to
understand what I am doing wrong.
Start with this one.
and anyone in any other thread I've posted.
Thank You.
Pete.
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Oblivi0.on
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nah, i was this before q3w went down.pete wrote:Thanks, my friend.Oblivi0.on wrote:i can understand you fine mate.
Were have you been all that time?
You were my first friends on RAW at the time with Bdw3, Scourge, formaldehyde and raw.
Saltybluecrackers isn't your name anymore.
Pete
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phantasmagoria
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And PlanetQuake. I actually kinda miss you thereOblivi0.on wrote:i only used saltybluecrackers at raw-one.
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I have no complaints, pete. Keep up the good work.
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its been a while...^misantropia^ wrote:And PlanetQuake. I actually kinda miss you thereOblivi0.on wrote:i only used saltybluecrackers at raw-one.
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Thanks MQMassive Quasars wrote:I have no complaints, pete. Keep up the good work.
But Litterally meant to correct my mistakes, grammar or the likes,
I know it's far from perfect. It will only help me if you correct me.
Recently I have sent one of my Innovations to a search Cie.
If it is as bad in my writing as you (not you ) are stipulating here, I will never have a chance.
Pete
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Oblivi0.on
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personally i like the way you write, but i think the main "problem" is everything you construct is made up of really small sentences that don't really seem to connect that well. It's hard to put a finger on. But fuck that, your grammar is better than mine.
If your concept was good i'm sure they'll understand you, your writing's just different, that's all
If your concept was good i'm sure they'll understand you, your writing's just different, that's all
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Your English isn't so bad that it can't be understood, but if you want your grammar and spelling corrected, it's a bit different. I mean no offense, but your posts are far from perfect.pete wrote:Thanks MQMassive Quasars wrote:I have no complaints, pete. Keep up the good work.
But Litterally meant to correct my mistakes, grammar or the likes,
I know it's far from perfect. It will only help me if you correct me.
Recently I have sent one of my Innovations to a search Cie.
If it is as bad in my writing as you (not you ) are stipulating here, I will never have a chance.
Pete
I have no problem with your style, though.
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^misantropia^
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I was somewhat under the impression Quebus banned you for pushing it one too many times. But this is not the case then?Oblivi0.on wrote:its been a while...^misantropia^ wrote:And PlanetQuake. I actually kinda miss you thereOblivi0.on wrote:i only used saltybluecrackers at raw-one.
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Oblivi0.on
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they dont seem to ban names there. just the ip's. i got a new ip every couple of days back then and he gave up banning them all. now he lets me go off all the time. quality.^misantropia^ wrote:I was somewhat under the impression Quebus banned you for pushing it one too many times. But this is not the case then?Oblivi0.on wrote:its been a while...^misantropia^ wrote: And PlanetQuake. I actually kinda miss you there
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Thanks but We are friends and please be sincere.Oblivi0.on wrote:fuck, you have better english than half of the posters here.
amidyfreak comes to mind as one. and his lackey, toxicbug.
Since many in here find me weird, even a troll, I think there is something strange to be corrected.
Can you help?
BTW Nice to see you back, keep in touch.
Pete
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^misantropia^
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Oblivi0.on wrote:they dont seem to ban names there. just the ip's. i got a new ip every couple of days back then and he gave up banning them all. now he lets me go off all the time. quality.
Sweet. If you ever feel the urge to spam it a little, by all means do; PQ could use some stirring up.
PS: Am I right to think Quebus has a weak spot for you? :icon26:
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