snitch (scourge)
snitch (scourge)
Aint no snitches ridin wit us
Ol motor mouth niggaz could holla front
Cant no loose lips get on my yacht
I leave player haters at the dock, watch
And your nigga help ya burn the block
As soon as you get hot nigga turn to cop
Ya settin up federal appointments now
Nigga all in court pointing out
Daddy not knowing what he doin his child
We gon mail him his finger when he get out, yea
Just to show him what we's about
Never let shit about G'z leave ya mouth, yea
You inside can't leave ya house
Two donut lovers to police ya house
I sneak past those brothers leak in ya house
And put the heat dead in yo mouth, so shut up
Ol motor mouth niggaz could holla front
Cant no loose lips get on my yacht
I leave player haters at the dock, watch
And your nigga help ya burn the block
As soon as you get hot nigga turn to cop
Ya settin up federal appointments now
Nigga all in court pointing out
Daddy not knowing what he doin his child
We gon mail him his finger when he get out, yea
Just to show him what we's about
Never let shit about G'z leave ya mouth, yea
You inside can't leave ya house
Two donut lovers to police ya house
I sneak past those brothers leak in ya house
And put the heat dead in yo mouth, so shut up
Last edited by Keep It Real on Tue Aug 16, 2005 5:50 am, edited 1 time in total.
I'll give all my contenders switchblade tracheotomies
Cuz they already sound like they've had frontal lobotomies.
They're as relevant as the decaying scriptures of Ptolemy
About as cutting-edge as Galilean astronomy.
Their rhymes are as stale as Mel Gibson's Aramaic
And their flow is more archaic than a Renaissance mosaic
Deep in the earth, imperfectly preserved
Like aboriginal religion after time on the reserves
Or the balance of peace after Bush in Iraq:
"Go get us some oil, and then bring the boys back."
The U.S. administration is like Judas Iscariot
Giving tax breaks to the rich while raping the proletariat.
In fact the whole world's in a pretty fucked-up state
With right-wing Christian fanatics controlling its fate
Denying gays their rights and denying blacks their reparations
It's stupid like a Parkinson's case performing operations.
We've still got delinquents lacing girls' drinks with roofies
And we've still got Ben Stiller making shitty fucking movies.
I can see more problems than I can fit into my stanzas
Now they're teaching creationism in high schools in Kansas
Only they disguise it as "Intelligent Design"
But the kids would learn more playing "show me yours, I'll show you mine."
So religion enters science and corrupts it to the core
While they shut down research funding to send the nation off to war.
Stem cell research could mean the end of disease
But it can't be allowed because the pro-life movement disagrees
And Africa's besieged by an AIDS epidemic
Which to end we'll need the resurrection of Alexander Fleming
Or the western hemisphere to start donating medicines
Or just take the use of condoms off the list of Christian sins
"Tell me Father, how'd you like to suffer HIV?"
"But I can't get it from my lover, in July he's turning three!"
In the U.S. if you're rich enough you can molest little boys
Just look at Michael Jackson saying porno mags is toys
Plying kids with "Jesus juice" and sleeping in their beds
Even if it wasn't rape he was fucking with their heads.
The second coming of Jesus is a joke, he's just a man
And still there's persecution in his name from here to Kazakhstan
And Muslim fundamentalists trying to buy their way into heaven
Pose the omnipresent threat of another 9/11
And the media just use it to sustain a state of fear
Kicking the American fascist state into gear
But in the new millennium England's still a monarchy;
I say overthrow the Windsors, and start again from anarchy.
Hereditary government is not the fucking answer
Passed down the generations like blue eyes or cancer
There's so much in the world that's fucked-up and wrong
But that's all I can spit for now -- I'm done with this song.
Cuz they already sound like they've had frontal lobotomies.
They're as relevant as the decaying scriptures of Ptolemy
About as cutting-edge as Galilean astronomy.
Their rhymes are as stale as Mel Gibson's Aramaic
And their flow is more archaic than a Renaissance mosaic
Deep in the earth, imperfectly preserved
Like aboriginal religion after time on the reserves
Or the balance of peace after Bush in Iraq:
"Go get us some oil, and then bring the boys back."
The U.S. administration is like Judas Iscariot
Giving tax breaks to the rich while raping the proletariat.
In fact the whole world's in a pretty fucked-up state
With right-wing Christian fanatics controlling its fate
Denying gays their rights and denying blacks their reparations
It's stupid like a Parkinson's case performing operations.
We've still got delinquents lacing girls' drinks with roofies
And we've still got Ben Stiller making shitty fucking movies.
I can see more problems than I can fit into my stanzas
Now they're teaching creationism in high schools in Kansas
Only they disguise it as "Intelligent Design"
But the kids would learn more playing "show me yours, I'll show you mine."
So religion enters science and corrupts it to the core
While they shut down research funding to send the nation off to war.
Stem cell research could mean the end of disease
But it can't be allowed because the pro-life movement disagrees
And Africa's besieged by an AIDS epidemic
Which to end we'll need the resurrection of Alexander Fleming
Or the western hemisphere to start donating medicines
Or just take the use of condoms off the list of Christian sins
"Tell me Father, how'd you like to suffer HIV?"
"But I can't get it from my lover, in July he's turning three!"
In the U.S. if you're rich enough you can molest little boys
Just look at Michael Jackson saying porno mags is toys
Plying kids with "Jesus juice" and sleeping in their beds
Even if it wasn't rape he was fucking with their heads.
The second coming of Jesus is a joke, he's just a man
And still there's persecution in his name from here to Kazakhstan
And Muslim fundamentalists trying to buy their way into heaven
Pose the omnipresent threat of another 9/11
And the media just use it to sustain a state of fear
Kicking the American fascist state into gear
But in the new millennium England's still a monarchy;
I say overthrow the Windsors, and start again from anarchy.
Hereditary government is not the fucking answer
Passed down the generations like blue eyes or cancer
There's so much in the world that's fucked-up and wrong
But that's all I can spit for now -- I'm done with this song.
That was fucking wack, who is that, Immortal Technique? Its like he went through a dictionary and just tried to rhyme the biggest words. What the fuck is Mel Gibson's Aramaic? That nerd junk is not hip hopsliver wrote:I'll give all my contenders switchblade tracheotomies
Cuz they already sound like they've had frontal lobotomies.
They're as relevant as the decaying scriptures of Ptolemy
About as cutting-edge as Galilean astronomy.
Their rhymes are as stale as Mel Gibson's Aramaic
And their flow is more archaic than a Renaissance mosaic
Deep in the earth, imperfectly preserved
Like aboriginal religion after time on the reserves
Or the balance of peace after Bush in Iraq:
"Go get us some oil, and then bring the boys back."
The U.S. administration is like Judas Iscariot
Giving tax breaks to the rich while raping the proletariat.
In fact the whole world's in a pretty fucked-up state
With right-wing Christian fanatics controlling its fate
Denying gays their rights and denying blacks their reparations
It's stupid like a Parkinson's case performing operations.
We've still got delinquents lacing girls' drinks with roofies
And we've still got Ben Stiller making shitty fucking movies.
I can see more problems than I can fit into my stanzas
Now they're teaching creationism in high schools in Kansas
Only they disguise it as "Intelligent Design"
But the kids would learn more playing "show me yours, I'll show you mine."
So religion enters science and corrupts it to the core
While they shut down research funding to send the nation off to war.
Stem cell research could mean the end of disease
But it can't be allowed because the pro-life movement disagrees
And Africa's besieged by an AIDS epidemic
Which to end we'll need the resurrection of Alexander Fleming
Or the western hemisphere to start donating medicines
Or just take the use of condoms off the list of Christian sins
"Tell me Father, how'd you like to suffer HIV?"
"But I can't get it from my lover, in July he's turning three!"
In the U.S. if you're rich enough you can molest little boys
Just look at Michael Jackson saying porno mags is toys
Plying kids with "Jesus juice" and sleeping in their beds
Even if it wasn't rape he was fucking with their heads.
The second coming of Jesus is a joke, he's just a man
And still there's persecution in his name from here to Kazakhstan
And Muslim fundamentalists trying to buy their way into heaven
Pose the omnipresent threat of another 9/11
And the media just use it to sustain a state of fear
Kicking the American fascist state into gear
But in the new millennium England's still a monarchy;
I say overthrow the Windsors, and start again from anarchy.
Hereditary government is not the fucking answer
Passed down the generations like blue eyes or cancer
There's so much in the world that's fucked-up and wrong
But that's all I can spit for now -- I'm done with this song.
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BT, you a wanksta.
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well step your game up, this isn't 1988, you're wacksliver wrote:lol. i wrote it in the car when i got bored after my mp3 player's batteries died.seremtan wrote:btw that's the most white liberal sounding rap i've ever heard.
without a dictionary i might add.


I never said I was tupac, you twit. You're the one who thought it was Immortal Technique lol ... and "rhyme scheme" desn't even apply to your bullshit, so i'm not worried.Keep It Real wrote:well step your game up, this isn't 1988, you're wackthere are 16 bars in a verse you pasty nerd, and your rhyme scheme is about as interesting as the sesame street theme
Edit: here are 4 popular songs at random:
Bone Thugs N Harmony - Crossroad
Busta Rhymes - Salute da Gods
Tupac - All Eyez on Me
Notorious BIG - Hypnotize
Crossroad is the only one with 16 bars in the first verse.
what the fuck is a twit, you even flame like a pasty nerdsliver wrote:I never said I was tupac, you twit. You're the one who thought it was Immortal Technique lol ... and "rhyme scheme" desn't even apply to your bullshit, so i'm not worried.Keep It Real wrote:well step your game up, this isn't 1988, you're wackthere are 16 bars in a verse you pasty nerd, and your rhyme scheme is about as interesting as the sesame street theme
Edit: here are 4 popular songs at random:
Bone Thugs N Harmony - Crossroad
Busta Rhymes - Salute da Gods
Tupac - All Eyez on Me
Notorious BIG - Hypnotize
Crossroad is the only one with 16 bars in the first verse.

In case you really don't know what rap lyrics are supposed to sound like, you can't just rhyme 1 syllable at the end of a line the whole song, that was wack in the 80s. Look at this quote:sliver wrote:I never said I was tupac, you twit. You're the one who thought it was Immortal Technique lol ... and "rhyme scheme" desn't even apply to your bullshit, so i'm not worried.Keep It Real wrote:well step your game up, this isn't 1988, you're wackthere are 16 bars in a verse you pasty nerd, and your rhyme scheme is about as interesting as the sesame street theme
Is it the car, is it the ice, is it the grill
Cause I’m a star that pay the price to keep it real
She at the bar, she lookin nice, she on the pill
You need to think about rhyming multiple words and keeping the rhyme flowing, not some Alexander Flemings bullshit
Yeah, his new album should be awesome, looking forward to something decent this year. The only album I've liked so far is the documentaryKeep It Real wrote:Its great, what a nice beatsys0p wrote:- no wares- if you can show that it's free legally, I'll put it back up
Tell me what you think, I love it