Quake3World

yea not shappy at all.

its lenthy, but a quick scan doesnt reveal alot of waste so.

glhf

qwfix

hf tho :]

Nightshade wrote:

Dave wrote:Honest opinion? I stopped reading after

"I am applying for this post as it is a role that interests me greatly,"

I didn't grab me enough to keep reading

What should he have started with?
Hacking my way through dense brush with a machete dulled by cleaving too many pygmy skulls, I stumbled, dazed upon your advert. Squinting in a vain attempt to focus my mamba venom-blurred eyesight, I hoped desperately to remain conscious long enough to inform you of my burning desire to be considered for this position.
Please respond as soon as possible as the sun is setting and I've only one flare left.

Regards,
Carl Slocombe

lol if I were an employer I would take this as sarcastic, as if the person weren't serious about applying at all. Although I would post it on Quake3World for some laughs.

No shit? That's fucking amazing.

Zerofactor wrote:

Nightshade wrote:

Dave wrote:Honest opinion? I stopped reading after

"I am applying for this post as it is a role that interests me greatly,"

I didn't grab me enough to keep reading

What should he have started with?
Hacking my way through dense brush with a machete dulled by cleaving too many pygmy skulls, I stumbled, dazed upon your advert. Squinting in a vain attempt to focus my mamba venom-blurred eyesight, I hoped desperately to remain conscious long enough to inform you of my burning desire to be considered for this position.
Please respond as soon as possible as the sun is setting and I've only one flare left.

Regards,
Carl Slocombe

lol if I were an employer I would take this as sarcastic, as if the person weren't serious about applying at all. Although I would post it on Quake3World for some laughs.

juggy's plethora of pictures!

Nightshade wrote:

Dave wrote:Honest opinion? I stopped reading after

"I am applying for this post as it is a role that interests me greatly,"

I didn't grab me enough to keep reading

What should he have started with?
Hacking my way through dense brush with a machete dulled by cleaving too many pygmy skulls, I stumbled, dazed upon your advert. Squinting in a vain attempt to focus my mamba venom-blurred eyesight, I hoped desperately to remain conscious long enough to inform you of my burning desire to be considered for this position.
Please respond as soon as possible as the sun is setting and I've only one flare left.

Regards,
Carl Slocombe

I think i might use that you know...

Nightshade wrote:What should he have started with?
Hacking my way through dense brush with a machete dulled by cleaving too many pygmy skulls, I stumbled, dazed upon your advert. Squinting in a vain attempt to focus my mamba venom-blurred eyesight, I hoped desperately to remain conscious long enough to inform you of my burning desire to be considered for this position.
Please respond as soon as possible as the sun is setting and I've only one flare left.

Regards,
Carl Slocombe

that's fucking brilliant

Thanks Jules, I take that as a real compliment coming from the likes of you.

Be honest though, it was just the mamba venom reference that gave you a stiffy, wasn't it?

that was definietly the clincher

Don Carlos wrote:Job thing i have done so far, gotta finish it by tomorrow and hand it in!!

Please indicate why you feel you are a suitable candidate for this position, listing any relevant skills and competencies.


I am applying for this post as it is a role that interests me greatly, and I have relevant skills and experience. I am sure it is a role I will both enjoy and excel in and I feel I am an ideal candidate for this post due to the following:
Proven technical skills: I have previously worked in computer store that involved me diagnosing and repairing PC systems that were brought to us.

How about "I feel the position would suit me both personally and as a compliment to my skills". Branch off from there. Your opening sounds cliche because it's pretty much what anyone pens when they're first responding to this question.

I have attained 2 A levels in computing and system technician courses.

How about "I have A-Level qualification in computing and system maintenance" (or whatever the real qualifications were called)

I am also able to program in raw HTML, a trait that I have learned from qualification and helping run a major website.

You'll get shot down instantly by stating you 'can program HTML'. Arguably, HTML is programming because you generate a document which generates a potentially dynamic response from the browser. But unlikely. At best, HTML can be called 'scripting' and you might get away with it. I would refer to 'Web design experience' rather than nailing just HTML. The web today is barely dependant on HTML (at least in the sense of how much time you would spend working with it) and if you hint at understanding this you'll impress.

Team member: I am diligent and thorough in my work. I am presentable, eloquent and friendly, and enjoy working as a part of a team.

This section ended up not being about your team skills and instead about general skills. Would suggest elaborating on your team skill levels or experience (if you can say 'have worked in teams of varying size over the course of x years experience') this sounds better

On a day to day basis I am polite and pleasant to all colleagues and customers alike. This has always been the case in every job that I have had.

I always felt this was a bit like stating 'I brush my teeth every morning before coming to work so's I don't make people barf up close like'.

Perhaps 'My customer-facing skills have been continually improving throughought my work history, and this is an area which I feel can continually be improved

I have worked both on the phones and also in a face to face customer service I believe that if you know your job

How about 'with a good understanding of the business and appreciation of my role within it'?


Stopped here, got bored. Any good so far? I'm probly too late.

BTW you should never need to mention your written skills on a questionnaire, as it should come through naturally as part of the piece. It's one of the few aspects of your skills you can actively demonstrate to the employer on the CV/questionnaire itself.

Foo wrote:How about "I feel the position would suit me both personally and as a compliment to my skills". Branch off from there. Your opening sounds cliche because it's pretty much what anyone pens when they're first responding to this question.

compliment or complement?

no idea

well to compliment denotes praise or gift or something like that.

Complement is more like:

my skills complement her skills, so together, we make a complete set of skills (since I have skills A B C and she has skills D E F), so for a task that requires skills A-F, our combined skills will be up for the job.

o rite chz

i agree with Foo on the 'program HTML' part. html is as static as a brick house. you dont program. you lay out