Quake3World

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 7:13 pm**

more work on the face

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 7:14 pm**

rep wrote:
Uaintseenme wrote:I wish I could get straight criticism out of you bastards.
I gave you straight criticism.

Learn anatomy. You're drawing a generic silhouette. Anyone can do that. You need to understand how the major muscles wrap around each other to produce that silhouette. Then you'll be able to draw a figure in any pose.

You draw worse than I did when I was in the third grade. I'm serious.

Detail is easy. Focus less on detail and more on form. When you add detail, try to stay within the lines, for fucking god's sake. Look at the clip on the gun in her right hand.

Also learn something about line quality and line width. You're running over the same line many times with your pen, creating a scratchy and uncertain look.

Think about fucking light sources. You've got shadows in all directions on her face and holster.

Think about things before you draw it out. Why would her uhh ninja bandana be whisping in the wind, but her hair and the thing under her right arm aren't?

Now this is quality criticism. Thank you, although the whole 3rd grade drawing better thing kinda hurt

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 7:15 pm**

I'll redraw her later, then I'll post a new one, maybe I'll take a look at muscular stuff and what not

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 7:17 pm**

yea s got it to hear now.

maybe complete a few strips and we'll tear them apart.

hey, i bet by thattime, youd be better at scetching her

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 7:19 pm**

Here's criticism. It's extremely average.

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 7:21 pm**

hey after hearing dave describe hey body, i imagined the advetures that she had had ,smashin herself up so much on missions n shit i bet

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 7:26 pm**

you shoulda put more detail in the vjj.

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 8:43 pm**

I like the realism of her appendectomy scar. :icon14:

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 8:48 pm**

so... i might post some of my mediocre stuff later on

be prepared

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 8:49 pm**

Uaintseenme wrote:Drew this with a pen, so no erases...hense the reason it's called a sketch.

[lvlshot][/lvlshot]

well, it's a cyberpunk chick with akimbo Uzis and a kanji tat - the ultimate nerd subject matter - but technically-speaking you're on the road to somewhere so just keep at it. Try life drawing classes - you learn stuff and get to see some hot student girls naked if you're lucky.

Edit: correction, it looked like kanji in the lvlshot :icon26:

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 8:50 pm**

seremtan wrote: Try life drawing classes - you learn stuff and get to see some hot student girls naked if you're lucky.

I took one of those and proceeded to date my subject matter for a few months. :icon26:

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 8:51 pm**

seza wrote:i could sneeze ink on a piece of paper and it would look better. terrible, just terrible

i don't know if I've mentioned this before, but you're a fucking imbecile.

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 8:52 pm**

Transient wrote:
seremtan wrote: Try life drawing classes - you learn stuff and get to see some hot student girls naked if you're lucky.
I took one of those and proceeded to date my subject matter for a few months. :icon26:

lol, nice one :icon14:

I only went to one course, and there was this redhead babe a few times. I think I still have some pastel drawings of her arse somewhere.

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 8:56 pm**

rep wrote:You need to learn about anatomy and crosshatching.

Minus one point for the thong, but plus one point for giving her realistic tits. Too often comic style babes have size triple Z breasts.

You need to learn how to draw clothing folds, too.

Edit: Also think about your composition in a 3D space.

for once (and only once), i have to agree with rep.

not only are her boobs too small, her hips are too thick as well.

as rep pointed out, you need to learn the female anatomy.

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 8:57 pm**

actually, i know gal's that are that body style.. and no, they dont need to be bigger bresed and slimmer.. not all gals are like that ( to bad though *sniffle* )

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 9:03 pm**

seremtan wrote:lol, nice one :icon14:

I only went to one course, and there was this redhead babe a few times. I think I still have some pastel drawings of her arse somewhere.

It actually wasn't even my idea to ask her out. I mentioned her to Fury and he egged me on. GG Fury. :icon14:

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 9:24 pm**

You guys know any sites that give a basic explanation on forming body parts? Like the bare basics, like circles and shit?

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 9:28 pm**

If you're looking more for a superhero look, try the book "How To Draw Comics The Marvel Way" by Stan Lee and John Buscema.

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 9:34 pm**

Kinda, I'm trying to make a ragged, beat up looking soldier. Like a female version of solid snake

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 9:40 pm**

Transient wrote:If you're looking more for a superhero look, try the book "How To Draw Comics The Marvel Way" by Stan Lee and John Buscema.

you mean this? Click Only gives you the first bit

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 9:44 pm**

Aye.

I've got it on my shelf.

Allows me to do shit like this:

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 9:58 pm**

The HavoX wrote:
rep wrote:You need to learn about anatomy and crosshatching.

Minus one point for the thong, but plus one point for giving her realistic tits. Too often comic style babes have size triple Z breasts.

You need to learn how to draw clothing folds, too.

Edit: Also think about your composition in a 3D space.
for once (and only once), i have to agree with rep.

not only are her boobs too small, her hips are too thick as well.

as rep pointed out, you need to learn the female anatomy.

You obviously didnt read what rep wrote because he gave him points for giving her tits that didn't have their own zip code. I swear some of you people are so fucking stupid you should be castrated in order to protect the gene pool.

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 10:01 pm**

Dave wrote:
The HavoX wrote:
rep wrote:You need to learn about anatomy and crosshatching.

Minus one point for the thong, but plus one point for giving her realistic tits. Too often comic style babes have size triple Z breasts.

You need to learn how to draw clothing folds, too.

Edit: Also think about your composition in a 3D space.
for once (and only once), i have to agree with rep.

not only are her boobs too small, her hips are too thick as well.

as rep pointed out, you need to learn the female anatomy.
You obviously didnt read what rep wrote because he gave him points for giving her tits that didn't have their own zip code. I swear some of you people are so fucking stupid you should be castrated in order to protect the gene pool.

I'm afraid it's already corrupted. Quite possibly irreversably.

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 10:07 pm**

I've been cursed.

That's the problem

:icon3:

Posted: **Sun Jun 26, 2005 10:10 pm**

Oh I see you're from Missouri. Like scourge said it's irreversible. If we took off the bottom 2 tiers of couties in Iowa and gave them to Missouri, the IQs of both states would rise considerably.

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