its not bad.
doesn't really stir up any emotion though, kinda empty. not really my thing so i can't give you any great feedback other than give it some balls somehow. by balls I mean something that reaches out and pulls you into the music. nothing really grabs you. maybe that is the idea though as I have no clue since Devo/Mark Mothersbaugh is about as close as I'm going to get to that techno/trance/house/sheepfucker stuff you guys listen to.
i'd keep working on it though.
